Saltwater- Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille – February 17, 2016 – The Water Exercise

Saltwater

 

 

tears drop in ocean

cloaking pain with saltwater

eternal waves roll
 

View original prompt here.

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5 responses to “Saltwater- Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille – February 17, 2016 – The Water Exercise

  1. The ocean is a big place to loose our own tears. Hopefully we can also find some comfort in or with the waves…

    kaeru is frog in Japanese. The Japanese word also means returning.
    And well I like frogs… kaeru has appeared many times in my haiku.
    If I could be so intuitive… Thank you.

    Continued success with your other writing too. 🙂

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